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8 responses to “Chapter 43.3”

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   Dolly Llama

   March 14, 2024

   COME TO YOUR SENSES PAUL

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      SirianaSims

      March 14, 2024

      WHEN YOU KNOW, YOU KNOW although maybe check the other part is on the same page first next time.

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   cathytea

   March 14, 2024

   It’s not too late! I love wordless chapters. Great storytelling with the screenshots.

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      SirianaSims

      March 14, 2024

      Thank you! I was a little worried about trying a wordless chapter, so I’m glad it worked ❤️

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   MonaSolstraale

   March 14, 2024

   I love the wordless chapter is so telling. Each image describes a state of mind, from the boots carelessly left on the floor to the heartbreaking ending where Poul looks into the box with an engagement ring, with Julia’s face in the background.

   The images are so well chosen and their visual beauty stands in stark contrast to the heartbreaking message they leave behind. Loss, grief and hopeless meaninglessness. I feel so sorry for them both 💔

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      SirianaSims

      March 14, 2024

      Thank you so much! I had a hard time deciding which pictures to use for this ❤️
      I feel sorry for them both too, I really wanted Paul’s loneliness and despair to stand out, especially compared to the happy wedding pictures of his parents.

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   Kymber Hawke

   March 14, 2024

   I agree about the wordless chapter. This turned out amazing! I really felt his emotions, and I feel so badly for him.

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      SirianaSims

      March 14, 2024

      Thank you so much!! ❤️

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